At this juncture, there's nothing for discussion that would be of interest to the membership...critiquing formatting and flow can be a bit mundane.....I'd have asked those responding to my post to E-mail me, actually I would have E-mailed them direct, but we don't have that option around here, so I asked them to PM me.
Didn't get invited to do any reviewing & not reviewing anything right now, but know several authors.....