Our Fids story (new version)

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In the past I created a game "Our fids story" which isn't played any longer. I thought I'll create a new version, which has less rules and is probably easier.

It has just two main rules:
  • Each player can add a new character, but it has to be his/her fid (if you have more than just one, you can add more)
  • Each player adds just one sentence (not half sentence, not two)

I thought it is easier cos now everybody can write about each parrot (just can't make a "debut" of somebody's fid). Also, in my opinion sentences which are written by different persons sometimes sound terrible (because we have many non-native English speakers, including me and we have different English levels).

Suggestion rules:
  • The next person copies the text from the previous post and adds own sentence. If the text is already long, you can subtract few first sentences
  • If one character disappears in some way, "reintroduction" may do its owner (?)
  • If you are a native speaker, you can correct gramma (just don't change the context)

The beginning:
Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts.
 
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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead.
 
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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek.
 
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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache. Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head.
 

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Sunny the Sun Conure (sept '18, gotcha 3/'19). Mr Jefferson Budgie & Mrs Calliope Budgie (albino) (nov'18 & jan'19). Summer 2021 Baby Budgies: Riker (Green); Patchouli, Keye, & Tiny (blue greywings).
Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory!
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory!Tiki wanted to join the raid
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory.but no one believed her
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts.tango ate the nuts
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big.he estimated tangos power
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big. He estimated Tango's power.
Ziggy and Kai mobbed Tango for the nut he ate.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big. He estimated Tango's power.
Ziggy and Kai mobbed Tango for the nut he ate.Tango screamed *loudly*
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big. He estimated Tango's power.
Ziggy and Kai mobbed Tango for the nut he ate. Tango screamed *loudly*. Ziggy launched his poop in Tango's face.
 

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Zenek went to a park to see if there are any of his friends. Jasper was there stealing everybody's walnuts. Zenek tried to talk to him about his naughty behavior. Tiny offered Zenek some broccoli instead. The conure ate it and still was angry at Jasper. Jasper flung his walnuts at Tiny and Zenek. One of the nuts hit Zenek's head and he got headache.

Keye offered to fetch Jasper some ice from the food trucks, to help his head. But, this was just a diversion, because Riker was actually planning a Raid on the local Lettuce Factory! Tiki wanted to join the raid. Lilla, who hates lettuce, tried to protect the local Lettuce Factory. But no one believed her. Meanwhile, Jasper had stopped throwing walnuts and started throwing macadamia nuts. Tango ate the nuts. King Jasper was shocked that a mere conure could possibly have eaten a nut that big. He estimated Tango's power.
Ziggy and Kai mobbed Tango for the nut he ate. Tango screamed *loudly*. Ziggy launched his poop in Tango's face.Tango bit ziggy’s leg off “this isnt PG anymore 😬👍
 

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