Trying mini-comics

[Rozalka]

Explanation: It's based on my story ("Parrot Land") which is partly posted here on the forum. It's my first comic ever. I made it prob just because I was curious how it is to make comics - just 4 images, but it took me 3 days. I'm not sure if I will be continuing the story on the forum because I feel like it's a bit wrong place

If somebody is very perceptive - yeah, the style is based on Rio movies. I was even taking the poses from there

 

[Zoruace]

I think you should put an order for those who haven’t read ur stories

Other then that it’s amazing!

 

[Rozalka]

Thanks
I'm not sure what you mean by "order". At this moment I don't know if I'm gonna continue it
Fun fact: today I realized that I forgot important detail in my story. Now I'm blocked until I remind it or create a new version.

 

[ριgριzυ]

Explanation: It's based on my story ("Parrot Land") which is partly posted here on the forum. It's my first comic ever. I made it prob just because I was curious how it is to make comics - just 4 images, but it took me 3 days. I'm not sure if I will be continuing the story on the forum because I feel like it's a bit wrong place
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If somebody is very perceptive - yeah, the style is based on Rio movies. I was even taking the poses from there

i love it, maybe you should do some border between the panels since the there's a lot of sky! do you have any more panels... coz I love this

 

[Rozalka]

i love it, maybe you should do some border between the panels since the there's a lot of sky! do you have any more panels... coz I love this

Thank you
For a moment I was thinking about a border but decided to not give it (prob because I was inspired a bit by a guy who doesn't make them neither)
That's all what I have. Making comic is time consuming. If I had more, I'd post them too. I created a separated thread just in case I did more but I don't think so (at least now) - it was just for fun to see the results.

I had even an idea to make something like a trailer for my story as a comic but I had no idea how. So I chose a scene which would be as less confusing as possible.

 

[Rozalka]

If you really want, I can try to make more but I don't promise anything. I may be busy with other things.

Just to connect threads - the story updates are here: https://www.parrotforums.com/threads/parrot-land-recreating-own-story.91829/page-4 (now there will be just links to another site)

 

[Rozalka]

This time I made an ultra-short comic - just 2 panels:

Sorry for the pinkish border (around the parrots) on the second pic - I was experimenting and it's the result
Based on this chapter: https://archiveofourown.org/works/38269402/chapters/95848717

 

[HeatherG]

I love your cartoon birds! The style is so much fun and they are so goofy.

 

[Rozalka]

just two panels again.

Originally it was supposed to be funny... but I'm too terrible in jokes, today I don't find it as funny

Also, I drew a thing I always had problems in imagining... a parrot on crutches. I had no idea how to imagine it and I know it's a bit wrong made but it was too hard to try again

 

[Rozalka]

Another not good joke...

You can't find in the written version because I skipped this scene (it was supposed to be in the 4th part)

 

[wrench13]

LOOK ! It's Máscara de Loro !! Ayeeee !!

 

[Rozalka]

Now when I look on my old post here... it was so BAD art.... I'm still not really god but my first post in this thread is cringe

Maybe it's not a typical comic but I will post here because idea is a bit similar. (ignore bad made background, I wasn't focusing on it much)