Trying some art

[Terry57]

That's fantastic, Roz! The only thing I noticed was a couple of typos.

"Divorce" rather than "divorse"

I would add "in" to this sentence:
Later she had other problems which resulted "in" her parents' divorce.

And did you mean "peer" pressure?

I love that picture of Veronica, the facial expression you did is wonderful.

ETA: Fox, we were posting at the same time

 

[Rozalka]

Thanks!

After posting it I was thinking about adding one more difference from human - the parrot version met Natalie 2 years later but maybe it doesn't really matter

 

[SailBoat]

No, it does not really matter as it could go to adding confusion to it.

Truly great recommendation above, you never have to be concern regarding Parrot Forum not helping!

Your growth has been a true joy to be part of! Just one word of advice: Keep-on, keeping-on! Or, if that does not translate: Love what you are doing!

 

[Rozalka]

Thank you for the corrections! I've already corrected them and made another character. I'm posting here again, knowing myself I did some typos again

 

[foxgloveparrot]

Thank you for the corrections! I've already corrected them and made another character. I'm posting here again, knowing myself I did some typos again

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Ok these are beautiful!!! I love them!
(Corrections: "faint too stressed" to "faint when too stressed" and "have been on a scene" to "has been on a scene")

 

[Rozalka]

Thanks!
Why I keep doing such obvious mistakes...

 

[Rozalka]

it's likely the last one

I never knew how to call this thing he wears... In the stories I call it as a blouse but I can change it

 

[SailBoat]

Possible a Shirt or a Coat. When I first looked at it I have guessed that he was wearing something in addition to his feathers.
Enjoy them!

 

[Rozalka]

I remember somebody asking me if I do animations too... No but theoretically I can make clouds moving... and here all my animation skills finish. I was curious how it would look like on my art - terrible

On photos it looks better.

 

[SailBoat]

Yup, watching clouds move can be like watch grass grow, but quicker!

 

[Rozalka]

I've got an idea... I used the fact that I am the creator of the art so I have access to all the layers - and now it looks fine

 

[SailBoat]

Congratulations!! You have clouds moving faster than grass growing!!
That's Great!!