Parrot Land (recreating own story)

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Honestly I thought I would write more about Fisher's Lovebird Land adventures... I was trying to figure out how the parrot version of Natalie being kidnapped for an interview looked like but I don't remember such scene... and I don't remember another Martin (because it would be the kidnapper's name but I remember only the macaw, not the lovebrid) So I'll just skip this. Maybe later, I'll add one chapter about this but I doubt because I have no idea why and how it would suppose to happen.

 
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Ik, it's not good
I know, it's very silly how somebody may be against own type. Actually there are some people irl who are against things they do - eg owning parrots but they're parronts (it's kinda popular on Facebook šŸ¤Ŗ )
 
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Originally the 4th part was the shortest one but from what I see, this will be the longest one in the written version... this only shows how many scenes I skipped in the previous parts (now I think I mention every remembered scene)
 
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I know, prob nobody cares about this info.... but maybe Parrot Land will get a continuation - it's very unofficial but I started thinking about the plot. Unlike parts 1-4, it wouldn't be written so chaotic and IMO better
 
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I know, prob nobody cares about this info.... but maybe Parrot Land will get a continuation - it's very unofficial but I started working on the plot. Unlike parts 1-4, it wouldn't be written so chaotic and IMO better
I added two sentences to this chapter but it doesn't change the plot.
And I added a new chapter:
 
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The last chapter

If you'd like to read it, here's the link to all 4 parts: https://archiveofourown.org/series/2850940
But honestly, I think it's very very very terrible, so I don't recommend reading it, lol. Idk if it's just because suddenly I started looking at everything I have written very critically... I know, I had been writing about the series badly before but now I'm even more critical.
 
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Jarmila appeared only in the last chapter but it's she
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I dunno if it has any sense but I'll try to add another part...
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FEW WEEKS LATER....
Natalie has already moved to Macpolis and joined a new class (she's in a 8th class - in this land it is the last year of education in the primary school).
From unknown reason boys and girls in her class like competing against themselves during PE lessons playing in two different teams.
One day the game on PE was volleyball. One of Natalie's classmates - his name is Bart, loves this game. He is well-known by his friends as being a big fan and many-time-winner of the volleyball.
The class decided to play until one of the teams gets 10 points. Natalie as a sport-clumsy-macaw was the one who missed the ball the most often of all girls, but nobody was angry at her.
Finally the girls were a match for the boys and the result was 9:9. It was the boys' turn to throw the ball.
"Look out, this point decides which team wins." - said Viki, one of the girls
The ball is in Daniel's wings.
"Bart, catch!" - Daniel said passing the ball to his best friend Bart knowing that he will do the best
"Oh no, no Bart, he is the best of us all" - said Ellee, another girl.
Then Bart thew the ball in Veronica's direction, who is the only one to not be a scarlet macaw, but its hybrid with a military macaw. She almost caught the ball... but didn't. The boys' team hurrayed, the girls were disappointment. Viki came to Veronica so angry and said to her "We failed again. And it's because of YOU".
"I'm sorry, I didn't want..." - Veronica answered scared.
"Sure, parrots like you are always badly developed" - said Ellee
Then Natalie came confused - "But, I missed the ball the most times!"
"But because of Veronica the boys got the 10th point." - Viki answered
"It's unfair... It was the only time when she didn't catch the ball... I think..." - Natalie couldn't believe what she hears.
Viki just showed a sign to go and said "Don't be by her side, c'mon"

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I know it can be silly :p
Today I was on a basketball match and I realized I did a small silly mistake... Bart is a "many-time-winner" of this game not volleyball. But he's still good in volleyball.
It means that somewhere in the 3th part I put volleyball instead of basketball... (or maybe I changed his hobby in the parrot version and I don't remember this difference between parrot and human. Hmm, it is a possibility... In such case it wouldn't be a mistake)



Btw here's the continuation I'm still working on: https://archiveofourown.org/works/43397232/chapters/109093056
Probably just one chapter is left
 

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