Our Fids story (new version)

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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Nightwing because he was a bad detactive
 
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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Salty because he was a bad detactive. But this part is a mistake cos Salty isn't in the story.
 

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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Salty because he was a bad detactive. But this part is a mistake cos Salty isn't in the story.
i changed it to nightwing my brothers lory does that count?
 
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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Nightwing because he was a bad detactive.

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Fela closed a book and said to her children that this story has too many mistakes.
 

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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Nightwing because he was a bad detactive.

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Fela closed a book and said to her children that this story has too many mistakes. Cricket suddenly appeared and murdered Fela and her children.
 

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Rozalka went to buy millet, but they were sold out. So she flew to another shop and bought it. shortly after Rozalka wen back home,Tiki robbed her millets. Then Zenek came, scared Tiki and took millet giving back it to Rozalka. Tiki called for back-up millet and pidgey came and pecked at zenek. Zenek isn't afraid of the sparrow and said to Rozalka to come back home. chris sthe macaw stole all the seeds Rozalka and Zenek had. Then Rozalka and Zenek called for Jaล› the policeman and he arrested Chris.little did they know...
chris is a policebird! Chris showed the evidence... but Jaล› discovered it was fake!
Jas was fired by Nightwing because he was a bad detactive.

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Fela closed a book and said to her children that this story has too many mistakes. Cricket suddenly appeared and murdered Fela and her children.all birds die
THE END
 

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That was the most child-friendly story ever, am I right?
 

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I think a new rule is needed. No killing nor attacking of more than one character in every... say... 15 sentences!

Otherwise it's just rude. It's like kids playing together to build something, but one kid just wants to smash everything. Why bother playing when all you're gonna do is destroy what other people are making?
 
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New story:

One day, Riker learned there are places called "stores" where ALL the seebs are kept.
 

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NO.
Tikitiel you are just gonna get ignored from this as long as you keep doing that.

Restart.
One day, Riker learned there are places called "stores" where ALL the seebs are kept.
 

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One day, Riker learned there are places called "stores" where ALL the seebs are kept.but tiki already stole them all
 

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Again. Tikitiel. The purpose of this game is to Build a Story together. Do you think you are somehow "winning" if, rather than being creative, you just bring it to an end?

"But other birdie killed them all" "But other birdie already stole them all" "Other birdie bit/hit/kicked etc" --these are not good stories AND not creative.

I am offering you a setup for a good story. A story about Planning a Raid OR a story ABOUT trying to steal them all OR a story about Wanting seeds, etc.

Be creative Tikitiel. Help WRITE a story. This type of game is about being Creative Together, it's not some videogame, already created by someone else, for the purpose of blowing it up. Add new sentences that Contribute to a story, rather than destroying it, or even better that give a building block to the next person to contribute further.

Now, you already blew-up my one-sentence offering twice now. So. It's your turn to offer a new, starting sentence, that will give an Opening for a Story to Grow. NOT for the purpose of destroying or ending a story, the purpose is to Create a story. Be creative, not Destructive. Okay? Go for it!
 

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Let's stick with this thread, but just start fresh, okay? I'll start the new story.
this what I meant wouldn't be "our fids story" - that would be more expended
 

ฯฮนgฯฮนzฯ…

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โ‹†โœง ๐’ซ๐“Š๐“‚๐“…๐“€๐’พ๐“ƒ ~ ๐น๐‘’๐“‚๐’ถ๐“๐‘’ ๐’œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“‡๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“ƒ ๐’ฎ๐’ฝโ™ก๐“‡๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’๐’น ๐’ข๐“Š๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐’ถ-๐“…๐’พ๐‘”

๐’ซ๐‘’๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“Š๐“‰ ~ ๐‘€๐’ถ๐“๐‘’ ๐’œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“‡๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“ƒ ๐’ฎ๐’ฝ๐Ÿฌ๐“‡๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’๐’น ๐’ข๐“Š๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐’ถ-๐“…๐’พ๐‘” โœงโ‹†
One day, Riker learned there are places called "stores" where ALL the seebs are kept, but he dies. The second near, chirp, chirp, "Guys! Dawn hatched!".
 

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โ‹†โœง ๐’ซ๐“Š๐“‚๐“…๐“€๐’พ๐“ƒ ~ ๐น๐‘’๐“‚๐’ถ๐“๐‘’ ๐’œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“‡๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“ƒ ๐’ฎ๐’ฝโ™ก๐“‡๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’๐’น ๐’ข๐“Š๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐’ถ-๐“…๐’พ๐‘”

๐’ซ๐‘’๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“Š๐“‰ ~ ๐‘€๐’ถ๐“๐‘’ ๐’œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“‡๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“ƒ ๐’ฎ๐’ฝ๐Ÿฌ๐“‡๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐’พ๐“‡๐‘’๐’น ๐’ข๐“Š๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐’ถ-๐“…๐’พ๐‘” โœงโ‹†

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